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The Scent of Rain by ~edgeofwrath:iconedgeofwrath:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2003-2009 ~edgeofwrath
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I always looooooooove the smell that rain makes. The moist smell on a cool dark night is very lovely. Any who, photo of moon behind tree's.

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~balancedvidiot May 18, 2003, 1:46:20 PM
this is rockadelic! ok, haiku poems are traditionally very zen-like poems on subjects relating to nature. this poem very much reminds me of that style of poetry, without the syllable counting of course.... but phrases like "ever is the essence of clear" and "orb by orb, dying the death of life" could have just as easily been written by a 100 year old japanese monk in a monastary somewhere near mt. fuji.

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when i die i want to be cremated and made into various shade of gray-scale paint.
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~alicatylon May 18, 2003, 5:05:10 PM
Defenetly zenish. You confront some very deep questions here. But i love the way you've set it up and the poetry flows wodnerfully, and the image fits the poem to a tee.

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doomslug of chaos! awaaayyyy!

~alicatylon
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~ganj-buddha May 18, 2003, 6:30:51 PM
nice, really nice. the overall flow is great, as well as the imagery. (quick thought, nothing had to be something at one point to become something.)
only crtiz i've got is that first line, last stanze, the whole microcapplally, or however you spell it kinda throws off the nicle little flow of words. kinda overloads it with a long word, other than that, mad props

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"I dont know if I'm one step from enlightment, or one step from insanity. Maybe they're the same thing."-Me
If knowlage is power, power gets courrupted, courrption is evil, knowlage is evil. Study hard, be evil.

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~Savetoday Mar 2, 2004, 6:57:56 AM
Sheerly amazing... this Visual Poetry was presented so well. I love "Ever, is the essence of clear"
Very nice. Interesting questions you search for in this.

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Do what you want cos a pirate is free!
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~caribbeanpirate Aug 12, 2005, 9:22:22 PM
Very nice poem. Flows exceptionally well. The colours and background image give off a very strong power and set the mood for the poem. ^_^ excellent!

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Sara
A.K.A. Phoenix

"Never frown because you never know if someone is falling in love with your smile"
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~edgeofwrath Aug 13, 2005, 4:55:49 PM
Thank you very much!

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The Edge... there is no honest way to explain it because the only people who really know where it is are the ones who have gone over. - Hunter S. Thompson

"I'm happy just to be." - DJ Encore
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